I won't die for you
there's nothing in it for me I dangle my disease, try to catch a cure when they cut me, I dreamed of babies on my wide hip, their milk breath and eyes wanting to bubble gum on my breasts and sleep my...
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I really feel it when I read your stuff, C. Gender doesn't seem to make a difference here, it's something you've hit on, quite undescribable by most mortals, and well it could be the heat stroke and...
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this was my favorite line...I count ceiling tiles. Very powerful poem....hugs
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i agree with, doug - this IS good and its straightforwardness makes it work (because of it, not in spite of it). the tone makes this poem read like a shared confidence and lets the reader connect to...
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T, thank you good sir, I'm in for a tiny edit. last line. I'm not happy with soft cries, its not true enough I don't cry soft, I wail like a banshee.not often, but when provoked, get your high waders...
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In the truck, don't drive it except in an emergency. tags out. I cleaned house looking for it, which is a superior mode compared to the mode where I turn the joint upside down. I guess the emergency...
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